I know, another post already. But, um, question.
Does this look ok?:

Compositionally.
It's England & America from Hetalia, & i wanted them to both be in the same picture, but... i think America is kind of being more overpowering (haha)...? Or would it still work to keep England in there? (Drew his hands in; he's pulling on his right glove.) Any color or whatever will also continue onto the next page (at least the lower half of the page), even though i've got a bunch of writing on it.
Oh, & England's head looks a little off, but am not sure if that's just me or what. Don't think the camera's angle affected it much; the drawing doesn't seem much warped. And, um, Alfred's hips are maybe too thin...? But he's right on the edge of the page, so.
Aaaaagh.
Plus, i thought maybe this would make this LJ more interesting. HAHAHA. (is shot)
Aaaaaaagh.